How to Write a Standout Personal Statement
Your personal statement is your chance to show admissions committees who you are beyond grades and test scores. Here's how to write one that stands out.
Understanding the Purpose
The personal statement is not a resume in paragraph form. It's a narrative that reveals your character, values, and how you think. Admissions officers want to understand:
Choosing Your Topic
Strong topics often involve:
Avoid:
Structure and Craft
Opening Hook
Start with a specific scene, detail, or moment. Drop the reader into the middle of the action rather than beginning with general statements.
The "So What?" Factor
Every anecdote needs reflection. After describing what happened, explain what it meant to you, what you learned, or how it changed you.
Show, Don't Tell
Instead of writing "I'm a hard worker," describe the 4 AM mornings at the bakery before school. Let the reader draw their own conclusions.
Authentic Voice
Write the way you actually speak (polished, but natural). If your essay could have been written by anyone, it's too generic.